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"Carnage" High Rez Character/Scene - CRITIQUES!!

 
n°27174
piajartist
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Posté le 01-05-2008 Ã  11:13:42  profilanswer
 

http://www.3dvf.com/forum/images/vignette/1/8/1439.jpg

 

Hey fella tweakers,
 
Ive been messing with the character/scene for a couple months ( mostly just trying to get the gesture and weight/balance right!)  
 
I'm going for semi-stylized character here who is obviously trying to bust out of restraints and break free.  Any Critiques on either gesture, ANATOMY, aesethetic and everything else is HIGHLY Welcomed!!  
 
Really I need the MOST HELP with the torso/shoulder area and compression of his musculature!  this guy needs to be done in less than 2 weeks....so if you feel like sending draw-overs or brutally honest criticisms, im all about it!
 
software: maya, zbrush
 
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3046/2455742253_fbf8efccd3_b.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2399/2456569636_ca729d7881_b.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2380/2455742349_83ff385521_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3259/2456569762_e4f3b7f5b8_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3102/2456569730_06d1eb66a6_o.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2356/2456569852_10819a53dd.jpg


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n°27193
piajartist
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Posté le 02-05-2008 Ã  10:30:35  profilanswer
 

moded the pose and limbs here...
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2295/2458226809_557a3c8f3b_o.jpg


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religions are like pills, which must be swallowed whole without chewing - hobbes
n°27195
Skelter
Posté le 02-05-2008 Ã  13:13:23  profilanswer
 

Hi!
 
Very impressive works. This was really made in only 2 weeks?
The posing and anatomy look good for me but I'm not a specialist in these matters. The muscles are really well modeled.
The only thing that looks a little odd it's the piece of cloth, it required a little tweaking to make look more "natural" I mean.
 
Really a good job man. Waiting for the textured version of your gladiator.


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n°27212
yacinedelu​cia
Posté le 03-05-2008 Ã  14:39:08  profilanswer
 

i think this is an absolutly amazing awsome job...four harsh crits !! i think that
the person that could give you this won't be found here until 2020...
normally you know abou cgtalk?!...there should be what you are looking for


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n°27229
piajartist
che?
Posté le 04-05-2008 Ã  09:41:31  profilanswer
 

thanks for the comments guys!
im updating the pics on a few forums, and cgtalk is definitely one of em
 
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2315/2463848590_ab5370e7fc_o.jpg
http://cghio.wordpress.com/files/2008/05/53gall_length.jpg


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religions are like pills, which must be swallowed whole without chewing - hobbes
n°27230
remib74
Posté le 04-05-2008 Ã  11:04:25  profilanswer
 

excellent model especially the pose and the gesture which are very expressive


Message édité par remib74 le 04-05-2008 Ã  11:05:51
n°27238
ekim_dl
Posté le 04-05-2008 Ã  17:03:07  profilanswer
 

allors, la pose et la expression je les trouve très réussies. Il n'y a rien de discorder.
 
Comme un détail minuscule je vue seulement la poitrine. Les jambes, mains et le ventre sont tous assez musculeux et la poitrine discorde avec cela.
 
Mais c'est toujours le meilleur regarder quelques photo-references pour pouvoir comparer.  
 
Un bon site est: http://www.human-anatomy-for-artist.com Peut-être cela t'aidera.


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